Group crit on first ideas for book

The crit that i was involved in today took up most of the day, which wasn't bad because we did quite abit of work. I feel that the way the crit worked was a good experience for me and evry one else, because we were put into groups to talk about other groups work, this was helpfully because we got to speak about others work in a team and i got goo feedback from a group of other students.